Just like in everyday life, the people we meet in books
should have a diverse assortment of personalities. We as authors want our
characters to be likable, or at least memorable. I build up a personality
profile for each of the characters, and do my best to hold them to that. There
have been a few scenes that when I wrote them, I needed a certain outcome to
happen that my characters just wouldn't perform. A few times I brought in
another character that would give me the result I needed. Oft times this leaves
me contemplating just how large of a role to give to these impromptu
characters. Traxell was one such impromptu appearance, and his personality
changed a few times during the writing.
Friday, August 31, 2012
Tuesday, August 21, 2012
I recommend against writing from a first person view with
strongly accented narrative. I wrote the piece for Scirririn several years ago
with a first person view, and with a narrative that would have felt right at
home a backwoods person that was raised by cross-eyed raccoons. The problem was
that somebody reading it for the first time was unable to relate to that style
of writing. Even though at the time that I wrote it, my mind could follow the
style, and understand her completely. Years later I go back to it and wonder
whatever possessed me to try it with that style. It is a tedious process to
pull enough of that garbage out while retaining the important aspects of the
story, and have it come out as a readable story.
Thursday, August 16, 2012
Remind me to not blog when I'm overworked, and distracted by
the fifty some odd co-workers carrying on with industrial style maintenance
behind me. Of course I'm typing this in those very conditions once again.
Like most of the authors that haven't been featured on the New
York Times Best Seller List, I have to actually earn a living at something
other than fitting words together. For me that means working on electrified
light rail vehicles that move people around the city every day.
I routinely disregard best writing practices all the time by
trying to squeeze it into my lunch break, which usually results in a few ugly
looking paragraphs each day if I'm lucky. Later, when I go back and read the
results I find myself gagging as I punch the delete key.
Today for lunch was the usual two yogurts, and dodging the
inane suggestions of the crowd that likes to offer me story ideas on their way
to reheating leftover pizza. I have more ideas than I do time to write them all
down, and my ideas mesh well with my thinking process. That's not to say that a
fraction of the plots tossed at me aren't good enough to write, but those don't
have any connection to me.
I mean like today, I was offered a plot where robot ninjas
hijacked a trainload of creampuffs. Meanwhile a picture that I had posted of a
moss covered ruin (borrowed from another publishing site) was the prompting for
the contest I am hosting for September. When that picture was joined by a
preliminary sample cover from my artist, that didn't fit the character it was
supposed to fit, I mentally named the picture, mixed it with the ruins photo,
and laid out the beginnings of a plot that frankly may end up as my entry into
the September challenge. The plot that sprang forth in my head had the feel of
something that I could relate with well enough to do the story. Frankly the
robot ninjas that were armed with chainsaws just didn't click into place for
me.
Friday, August 10, 2012
I supposed it would be good to talk about what projects I'm
doing.
Uiyah's Paw was the first story that I set out with the
thought of actually publishing it. It has gone through so many revisions along
the way, and about a dozen major re-writes. When I started it one of the main
characters talked with such a bad grammar/accent/uneducated manner that it was
near impossible for other people to read. Through five re-writes aimed
specifically at moderating the speech mannerisms it has become much better.
This current editing is aimed at further refinement of the speech, and
restructuring the religious aspects. The main church is now a lot more
believable as well as diabolical, though the extent of that aspect will not
come out until another book.
Stones of Magic was created to fill out the story after
Uiyah's Paw. A couple of characters we met briefly in the first book are now
returned in a leading role. The first real hints of trouble start appearing. So
far this book is just completing the first section, and the real action is just
beginning. I am writing chapters in this in order to keep a straight story line
with Uiyah's paw.
Ion 417: Katana is basically complete, though I don't like
the final scenes. I am working to edit them for a better presentation. At least
I have the new cover work for this book. My artist is working to make new
covers for the first two books in the new style.
I discovered that Shimmerwing was published with an old
file, and the right file was destroyed. I am spending some time recreating the
lost chapters. In addition it will be re-released with an extra story that I
wrote as a submission to a fantasy fiction contest. I discovered a short story
contest that had been running for about five months, and I found it only four
days before the deadline for submission. I surprised myself by pumping out
about 8500 words in two days, sent it to a friend for an emergency edit, and managed
to submit it with 7998 of the 8000 word maximum. I even had a day to spare. Now
I'm nervously biting nails while awaiting the judging of the 1800 stories that
were reportedly submitted.
Right now it's August, and that means Camp Nanowrimo is
underway. I'm madly trying to cram fifty thousand words into a story format
before the 31st. I just deleted a few thousand words from that
project because they didn't work.
I have a good dozen other stories that are sitting as ideas
in a file.
Monday, August 6, 2012
Many of my stories came along as simple random thoughts,
usually in the middle of talking to someone about mundane matters. Most
recently I was talking to one of my writing friends about a short story
challenge. She had dreamed up a good story idea, only to have it fade when she
woke to the cat's nudging. Thus I proposed a theory about cats and dreams that
is now on my list of pending stories.
That list of pending stories has grown sizable already, and will
likely never be completely written. This is not a real problem; the real
problem comes in restraining myself from diving into this list while I still
have a half-dozen projects in active working status.
Working on multiple different projects at once has benefits
as well as drawbacks. One benefit is that my mind can ponder possibilities of a
story line while I'm working on something else completely. I don't get burned
out on one particular story because I take a break from it to do something
else. One of the drawbacks is the possible blurring of characters.
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